Need help guys!

Nearly done composing this song (aside from the fine tuning to make it sliky smooth) and i feel like i need to add something more to it. What would you guys suggest; or should i just leave it?

https://soundcloud.com/hezimind/oganzsmic

Thanks for the reply!

imo you should start from beginning, it just sounds bad

waveform should show you that you indeed should start over.

maybe just try and build some drumsets and figure out how that works before trying full tunes.

add skrillex sounds and lazers

^this feedback LOOOL

hey guys new to composing full tracks (know my way around logic and making synths ext)

what do you mean by looking at the waveform its easy to see it needs to be started over? Will take constructive criticism all day! I wanna make some nice tunes!

This is random, but I think you look like Money Maker Mike.

its easy to be a prick on the internet. if you want some constructive criticism i would say your drums need a lot more impact. they need to be prcessed, like eq, compression, distortion, reverb. kick drums need to lead the track so they need to be the biggest instrument.