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Excision & Space Laces (Destroid) - Bounce (CeRJ VIP)


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the 1st drop could have a bit better drum pattern for the first part imo, but the 2nd part is what sells it! what i would personally do is switch the 1st PART from the 2nd DROP to the first DROP.

the 3rd drop is a little too short to judge but i think it can sound great! but from what i can hear, i think you want to focus on the drum part. it's a great concept but i don't think the synths can match up to the idea

all in all its great work! i would love to use these as dj tools and wreck the floor (approve)

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the 1st drop could have a bit better drum pattern for the first part imo, but the 2nd part is what sells it! what i would personally do is switch the 1st PART from the 2nd DROP to the first DROP.

the 3rd drop is a little too short to judge but i think it can sound great! but from what i can hear, i think you want to focus on the drum part. it's a great concept but i don't think the synths can match up to the idea

all in all its great work! i would love to use these as dj tools and wreck the floor (approve)

love that second phase of the 2nd drop

Thanks for the feedback you guys! I think I will probably end up swapping the 1st & 2nd drop. The 3rd drop goes into DNB but i'm not happy with the transition as both parts sound considerably different. The drums is something i focus heavily on when producing VIPs although in this one I don't have the isolated drums. I kinda think that it has partially entered Breakbeat territory rather than double speed Dubstep which is not what i was aiming for although i do like a barrage of drums haha.

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