Feedback thread

[andius]

Something i've been working on the past two days, probably quite a bit different than the other stuff being posted in here, but it'll be good to some 'outsider' ears on this one for me.

This is a link to a private track so i think you'll have to actually click into soundcloud to listen to (hitting play on the embedded track seems to not work)

https://soundcloud.com/cyclopianarchitects/material-v2/s-a1jaV

[Bulker]

https://soundcloud.com/bulkerdubstep/jaaahooor-1/s-FoPfA

[hubsahubsa]

http://www60.zippyshare.com/v/63006079/file.html

First time i'm trying 125bpm stuffff lol. never been a big fan of house but making it is really fun

[andius]

@ bulkier: the white noise is tad much at certain points. May e tone it down just a tad. Might just be the headphones I'm using right now though. Sounding good overall though

[billowypizza]

@hubsahubsa: That sounds really good, i was just waiting for a fatty lead synth to take the song to another level. It sort of sounds like you are beginning to have one at the end their, you just have to bring it that synth forward and you'll have a banger

Edit: Here's something that i've been working on, I realized that my songs had no atmosphere and thats what i was trying to do with this.

http://soundcloud.com/smashdub-1/cut

Edited March 22, 2013 by dorianm

[Bucktooth]

http://www33.zippyshare.com/v/21380881/file.html

Started this one a couple of days ago, deep and dark dubstep type of thing, not finished, but feedback is as always much appreaciated, and big up for the feedback so far, so many good tunes beeing made in this tread, keep it up (music)

[smarout]

@dorianm i'm not going to lie that sound in the beginning got very annoying very quick. Try adding some texture/reverb and what not to it so it isnt so ear piercing.

@bulker sounding pretty good man.

@bucktooth thats a pretty dope track. Drums are sounding good.

heres something i started. its just the drop, but now my laptop keeps crashing cause i have like 20 channels already so its getting frustrating trying to finish it haha.

http://www69.zippyshare.com/v/61682089/file.html

[billowypizza]

@dorianm i'm not going to lie that sound in the beginning got very annoying very quick. Try adding some texture/reverb and what not to it so it isnt so ear piercing.

heres something i started. its just the drop, but now my laptop keeps crashing cause i have like 20 channels already so its getting frustrating trying to finish it haha.

http://www69.zippyshare.com/v/61682089/file.html

Lol thanks. But what do you think about the rest?

and fuck smarout that's sounding insane. I could see a label picking that up

[Zero]

here is some new stuff I started tonight. I was just fucking around really and it ended up being doper than I expected. plus I stayed up 2 hours later than I intended.

http://www41.zippyshare.com/v/64995398/file.html

there is a tempo switch-up in there too. this is only the V1 so it will definitely see some changes.

I will leave feedback for everyone tomorrow. going to bed now

[billowypizza]

here is some new stuff I started tonight. I was just fucking around really and it ended up being doper than I expected. plus I stayed up 2 hours later than I intended.

Please don't take this personally. You really need to work on those synths, the sample seemed out of place and that switchup was too abrupt. I like the drums though. If you're using massive, i can try giving you a few tips just pm me. and again don't take this personally(ganja2)