Feedback thread

[yojap]

@Annunaki man that atmo is amazing creates such an epic vibe... Nice to hear you playing around with some heavy basses :D sounding sick. Sounding good pre mastering, you did well to combine the vibe of the intro with the heavy drop, maybe a little harsh but probably will sound better after equing etc... Nice one

@xZero This page sure has blown up haha it's madness I can't keep up (lol) That first track is coming along nicely man. I agree with tncee, bit more atmo would really give the track a lot more character.

That second one's sounding sweet too, your tracks sound so clean. Mine sound like shit haha. A bit of grunt in that drop would be sick to hear as well (as tncee mentioned).

Changed up this one that I've been working on, I feel like it could be a really good track but I can't seem to get it right...

http://www48.zippyshare.com/v/34660235/file.html

edit:

This is the updated version, took out the strings at the drop tried to incorporate the bubble sound as well. it sounds different but not drastically different. I like it, still not perfect lol

https://soundcloud.com/shark-attack-blow/death-from-above-v3

It maybe too ridiculous... haha

Thanks everyone for any feed back, appreciate it heaps

second edit:

The drop doesn't really sound like a song to me... Just an arrangement of noises

Edited March 8, 2013 by yojap

[JAN]

@ yojap: I really like that intro :D the rest of a tune is a little bit messy though. maybe you could remove the background melody when the bassline is playing. I think that'd make it a lot less chaotic. I kinda like the bassline :) it reminds me of another artist but I can't think of his name

this is what I've made today :)

any kind of feedback is appreciated!

1: http://www42.zippyshare.com/v/7714438/file.html

2: http://www23.zippyshare.com/v/13124091/file.html

I know it's not great, i'm learning how to use massive

Edited March 6, 2013 by JAN

[teh1buck]

@everyone who left feedback: thank you so much, finally getting better with ableton and production as a whole and really enjoy any sort of criticism

[Zero]

@tncee goddamn dude that shit is sick. please finish that and release that bad boy. or send it to a big name producer or something.

@yojap I like the sound fx throughout the tune. the drum fill before the drop is pretty tight too. the intro is really good. I feel like if you were to make the tune more about that lasery synth in the intro (almost like a trap tune) it could turn out surprisingly well. maybe make the drop a little less intense, yet somehow still incorporate those heavy basses too. kinda like the way the heavy ass synths in this one http://www.edmc.nu/trap/468980-adventure-club-retro-city-loudpvck-remix.html are used

@jandelmosselman you should try putting the bass in the intro through a hi-pass filter with some automation leading up to the drop. that way its there and you can hear it, but it hasn't fully made its presence, and when it does drop its that much more heavier because its on full blast and the sub came in too.

[yojap]

@ yojap: I really like that intro :D the rest of a tune is a little bit messy though. maybe you could remove the background melody when the bassline is playing. I think that'd make it a lot less chaotic. I kinda like the bassline :) it reminds me of another artist but I can't think of his name

this is what I've made today :)

any kind of feedback is appreciated!

1: http://www42.zippyshare.com/v/7714438/file.html

2: http://www23.zippyshare.com/v/13124091/file.html

I know it's not great, i'm learning how to use massive

Hey man, thanks. I'm really happy with the intro. Just took out the melody/strings sounds a lot better. Those sounds are sounding cool man, that first one reminds of a simple eptic intro, minus the drum rolls he uses. Kai the hitchhiker! Awesome lol. If you could switch up the drum pattern a bit here and there that would sound cool.

@xDJZero thanks for the feedback man, I get where your comin from. Ill keep messing around with it. See what happens lol

[smarout]

Decided to throw this thing up for free DL; decided to keep it simple and basic. Cant get over 25 channels or else my comp crashes lol. it was more for getting a tight mix.

https://soundcloud.com/cleptonic/dash-totald-dreaming-clepton

[Anunnaki]

This is as far as i made it atm... cheers (beer)

https://soundcloud.com/dj_steewy/steewy-lgiky-preview

I'll leave feedback after i get back from uni :)

[splintercellsz]

Yojap, I really like that intro!

Jande, #2 is SICK! Crazy as hell! Great synth sounds! I too am learning how to use massive.

Smarout, Tight mix it is! In many cases, less is more, and this proves that point! Sick job!

Anunnaki, I really like how that intro builds. That drop is sweet! I can't wait to hear the finished track! Very heavy synth!

I added a second drop and stuff... I know the lasers need to be redone, the long no sound at the end removed, and the track needs to be heavily mastered. But overall, I think it is ok.

http://soundcloud.com/1f145df1d5f51ds6df12/untitled-w-i-p

Edited March 8, 2013 by splintercellsz

[Guest ginomw]

Im working on a ep and i wanted to share some wips.

I would love some feedback on these.

https://soundcloud.com/ginomw/evade-wip

https://soundcloud.com/ginomw/ginomw-mechanoid-wip

https://soundcloud.com/ginomw/ginomw-oh-wip

[SKARFON]

http://soundcloud.com/skarfon/p0gman-they-know-skarfon-remix-clip

here's the WIP for my entry to the p0gman contest. haven't been able to work on it at all since I posted it but hopefully I'll finish it by next week :) lemme know what you guys think