Looking for some feedback on my production (deep house)

hey guys

I posted this when it was finished in the tracks section.

But i wanted to try and get some more detailed feedback from other producers that are better than me technically.

Would appreciate any tips from those producing similar to improve my quality etc.

Cheers!

https://soundcloud.com/forteproduction/riva-star-nobodys-fool-forte

http://www.edmc.nu/producers/477013-feedback-thread.html

http://www.edmc.nu/producers/477013-feedback-thread.html

ah my bad missed it!

Production-wise, it's pretty solid, I like the way everything has its spot in the spectrum. That being said, I'd get music theory lessons if I were you.

I mean, it's dissonant, the progressions are out of scale, and it's as if you used 5 different scales in one track, ranging from major to minor to nonsense. It might sound harsh, but it's true : replace all your instruments with a stock piano and you'll hear how much out of scale you are.