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so here is an idea to help bring a sense of community over here in the producer section, we post a track we're working on, someone leaves feedback and posts a track they are working on. leave feedback for two other people. just a thought.

here is my newest work. some trap/carnival that I made in a couple hours.

http://soundcloud.com/kyler0/zero-starter-kit

don't fail me guys

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Lovin this , not to keen on the detuned laser thing at like 0:28 and through out though , just dont think it fits, but the melody thing in the background is epic.

Heres somthing i made in the last couple of days , sounds way to messy atm because ive done no proper mxdown or master , and its clipping like hell haha , oh well here it is :)

http://www39.zippyshare.com/v/96169896/file.html

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@Zero i like the melody very much sounds somehow grimey and heloweenISH :D i agree with Budgieee tho, change a bit those lasers :D

@Budgieee I commented on your track yesterday, it's good. Maybe bringing those drums and snare in front a bit and make it sound a bit harder/fatter :D

This idea of feedback is great :) Here is mine latest work :D

Demo from SC

http://soundcloud.com/dj_steewy/steewy-sugar-rush-demo

Cut from V1

http://www43.zippyshare.com/v/15915145/file.html

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@Zero i like the melody very much sounds somehow grimey and heloweenISH :D i agree with Budgieee tho, change a bit those lasers :D

@Budgieee I commented on your track yesterday, it's good. Maybe bringing those drums and snare in front a bit and make it sound a bit harder/fatter :D

This idea of feedback is great :) Here is mine latest work :D

Demo from SC

http://soundcloud.com/dj_steewy/steewy-sugar-rush-demo

Cut from V1

http://www43.zippyshare.com/v/15915145/file.html

Theres somthing about the high hats that dont seem right :S the rest is actually so sick , really different from all the mainstream stuff going round atm

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@budgieee that track sounds pretty good to me man, get that mixdown in order and I think you can call it a day.

@annunaki that beat is a really interesting idea, that synth sounds like a guitar playing, those drums need to be a bit fuller IMO. try stacking the kicks and snares a little to give it extra punch. the drums need to stick out, maybe add some extra hi-hats between the crashes. definitely a cool idea though.

I will change that laser synth in mine for V2.

Thanks guys!

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Great idea zero! (approve)

@Budgieee: You hit the nail on the head with this one man, make's you wanna get up and jump around for sure haha. I really like the build up at 1:57 can't really think of anything that would add much apart from what's already been mentioned as I'm pretty new to producing.

@Anunnaki:Cool sound you got going there, definitely feelin it. I agree with Budgieee about the hats and also I think the guitar sound could be a bit heavier, like increase the low end if you know what i mean.

edit: don't know why but i couldn't hear the bass before, i retract my statment lol...

Just gonna jump in with a track i posted the other day, it's pretty much full length so thanks for listening (ok)

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