Flapman Posted September 1, 2014 Share Posted September 1, 2014 Hey I'm Zayler, a graphic & web designer from Australia. I'll occasionally update this page with my work, hope you enjoy and would love feedback. Link to comment
Moderator Becs Posted September 1, 2014 Moderator Share Posted September 1, 2014 Are those lips with diamonds in it? In my opinion the biggest mouth looks really unclear. the top of the mouth needs to be more defined or something. at the moment it looks pretty meh (no offense to you dear sir)! other than that i like the idea Link to comment
bSQUARED08 Posted September 1, 2014 Share Posted September 1, 2014 Are those lips with diamonds in it? In my opinion the biggest mouth looks really unclear. the top of the mouth needs to be more defined or something. at the moment it looks pretty meh (no offense to you dear sir)! other than that i like the idea ^ I agree with this. The image you're using for the lips looks a bit rough and pixelated- not sure if that's within your intentions or not, but I tend to be more aesthetically interested in a "cleaned up" image. The composition is interesting, so maybe I would be much more partial to the design if it weren't for the formal shortcomings? I'm a designer/ fine artist too, so I hope you're wide open to critique. Link to comment
Cyvnide Posted September 2, 2014 Share Posted September 2, 2014 (edited) for balancing purposes in the type maybe something like this if you want to keep the N and F connected or this although im no expert so idk. or maybe you want it off centre like you have it which is cool, you have full creative expression As for the entire graphic if its just a random creative piece it looks good. however I also agree on the lips thing Edited September 2, 2014 by Cyvnide Link to comment
Guest ginomw Posted September 2, 2014 Share Posted September 2, 2014 for balancing purposes in the type maybe something like this if you want to keep the N and F connected or this although im no expert so idk. or maybe you want it off centre like you have it which is cool, you have full creative expression As for the entire graphic if its just a random creative piece it looks good. however I also agree on the lips thing Defo second one Link to comment
Flapman Posted September 15, 2014 Author Share Posted September 15, 2014 Thanks for the critique guys :) it was just a random creative piece. Here's a preview of works I made for my first exhibition last year. And one of my favourites of the show. Link to comment
Bulker Posted September 15, 2014 Share Posted September 15, 2014 The two on the top right corner kick ass Link to comment
WyrmBagg Posted September 17, 2014 Share Posted September 17, 2014 Nicely done, Zayler! This one's sick + I like that king gorilla & those pyramid designs. Link to comment
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