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Are those lips with diamonds in it?

In my opinion the biggest mouth looks really unclear. the top of the mouth needs to be more defined or something. at the moment it looks pretty meh (no offense to you dear sir)! other than that i like the idea

^ I agree with this. The image you're using for the lips looks a bit rough and pixelated- not sure if that's within your intentions or not, but I tend to be more aesthetically interested in a "cleaned up" image. The composition is interesting, so maybe I would be much more partial to the design if it weren't for the formal shortcomings? I'm a designer/ fine artist too, so I hope you're wide open to critique.

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for balancing purposes in the type maybe something like this if you want to keep the N and F connected d1hNQAg.png or this yI9lfke.png although im no expert so idk. or maybe you want it off centre like you have it which is cool, you have full creative expression

As for the entire graphic if its just a random creative piece it looks good. however I also agree on the lips thing

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for balancing purposes in the type maybe something like this if you want to keep the N and F connected d1hNQAg.png or this yI9lfke.png although im no expert so idk. or maybe you want it off centre like you have it which is cool, you have full creative expression

As for the entire graphic if its just a random creative piece it looks good. however I also agree on the lips thing

Defo second one

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